Things are finally getting right around here. 
Knowing No Better 
In the course of one night
the ice on the lake is gone
and you've done to me what May
has done to the mountain. We set out 
in the small boat, and later, on canvas, 
I make its edges blur into ours. 
Shadows, you say, can fool the eye 
about how close a foothill may be 
and yes, I see how less indigo 
gives the water a less fearsome depth 
and that white is white 
and I won't need much. I accept 
this won't be a week of animals
and that you'll tell me when I'm ready. 
I agree the trees go last and if I opt 
for leaves, they should be all about 
the hour of dusk people thoughtlessly 
pass through. I see of course that too 
many changes of mind equal mud. 
But pardon me, knowing no better, 
I've painted too shallow a sky, even
as I've heightened our beloved mountain.
Copyright © 2008 Nance Van Winckel 
132 days.
P.S. Yum.
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